Is my writing alright in this?

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@Gargron yea, it's good. love the shot fired at the article bashing masto. conclusion hits hard, and sounds good

@Gargron it's pretty good, I'd just say it could use maybe a little fluff?

It's a listing of facts, which I think is fine, but reads a little dry 馃し鈥嶁檪锔

It's seriously fine, I'm just looking for something that could be improved...

I learned about the shatner thing.... I like it ( 汀掳 蜏蕱 汀掳)

@Gargron it's good! And you introduced me to a new word - Fazit - so that was fun 馃榾

It's good the way it is. Maybe a bit techy. I would have put the last bit you have on there first and fluff it a little. I can send an example for you to work from if you want to change it but I'm still not even sure if you have me muted after jabbing you a couple times.

@Gargron Fazit is not a common english word, probably, but a little flair is allowed and good

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