@Tusky looks great! it would perhaps look even better if you make the screenshot bigger and split the text into short clear points (mockup attached)
I'm not 100% sure that'd be better, just throwing out an idea for you to consider 😀 https://mastodon.technology/media/fjXoQB-fDfAgYXGsKe4
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