@ariadne I think if you're using multiple narrative voices in a book that it needs a clear structure to support the changes in tone/voice/style and that you don't lose readers by either confusing or frustrating them. For that matter, would it be possible to use the traditional third person omniscient voice throughout but play with it stylistically as a reflection of each character? I guess I'm old fashioned in my taste. #writing #fiction
@raymescallado thanks so much for your feedback Ray - really helpful! :) xx